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I shed my vulgar flesh
for a pure, mechanized mesh
of self-replicating nanobots.
I leave my horrid form,
as a feast for each small worm
in a cold, damp, and freshly-dug grave.
This is my exodus
from wrath, sorrow, amorous
yearnings, terror, boredom, and envy.
There shall be no more flood
of vile hormones in my blood
because this metallic shell has none.
My consciousness resides
in each "cell" so nothing hides
from my notice or from my control.
If I lived in a science-fiction story, I would try something like this.
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Haeth Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Baugh but remember ladd, you can never stop being human ;)

It is our blessing
It is our curse
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demonchild4unow Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
For the time being, yes.
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HARDCOREWHEELBARROW Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
HELL YEAH.
transhumanism
is
AWESOME.
genetics or cybernetics???
which???
:D
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:icondemonchild4unow:
demonchild4unow Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
I like them both, but I prefer cybernetics.
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Vemiank Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
Just because one lacks chemicals, does not mean one has no feelings.
Emotion is necessary for many things. Art, for one.
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:icondemonchild4unow:
demonchild4unow Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
That's the problem. :(
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Chibi-10102 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2007
it sounds depressing.......I like it keep up the good work!!!!
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:icondemonchild4unow:
demonchild4unow Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007
Actually, it's supposed to be a happy poem that describes my rejection of the sins of the flesh.

My skills are failure-istic. :(
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Quaddles-Roost Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love this line I leave my horrid form,
as a feast for each small worm
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demonchild4unow Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007
It's a total rejection of "my" former, fleshy existence.
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